Your own fiction,poems,reflections....

[lazy]

you know, there are things which are universal like good and evil
in this case there's a paradox, despite the fact that good and evil are obscure definitions and don't have any borders, there is a universal definition of good and a universal definition of evil
same goes for normal, there is a universal understanding of normal, but there are infinite states of smth being normal
so for everyone it's different, but it shouldn't be wrong, and you know what I mean by wrong

that's pretty much it
and that's awesome that you took your time to write about this
cheers! ^^

[Yōkai]

the ideea is that although there are several standarst of good and evil, they vary acording to every person. you think bending the corners of a book is ok, i think that is evil(just example). same goes with normal. my point is that one should not label another as normal or abnormal because their opinion is biased and is only according to their own belief.

i just tried to make a point.

thanks for reading, i apreciate it =)

[lazy]

that's what I meant by being obscure and not having any borders, that it varies

anyway, I got you idea

[SlaviQ]

Normal is the situation that you accept as stable. Believe, if something happen, there is no way to return to that normal. here comes another normal that you accept, but is different from what normal. It's like jumping from a platform to another with fear of falling in darkness. Once you reached it, you're safe until will try to jump to another....

Well, every man has his own definition of normal: emos have their own normal, but thisn ormal is kinda different from gops normal.. thats why you should find the place that suit you the most- through people that share your normal.

Sometimes i feel like i stuck between emo normal and gop normal, thats why i don't feel stability and my entire life is live a fast running flow that won't give any stability :(

[Yōkai]

nu intentionez sa fiu grammar nazi, dar nu ar fi mai bine sa scrii intr-o limba in care iti e mai simplu si sa omiti citeva greseli gramaticale? nu spun asta in num de rau, dar in cazul asta nu poti avea o parere negativa impotriva celor care scriu in rusa. imho.


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cit despre "normal" probabil ai dreptate, dar eu tot ma orientez dupa conceptul ca nu exista o definitie stabila pt normal si ea variaza de la o persoana la alta.

[SlaviQ]

your point of view is kinda dissapointing )

I know that i made a lot of mistakes. It's because I didn't write something in english for a long time (even our english teacher avoid talking in english).

I'm not that type that will be ashamed of making some mistakes, so if you know english so well (i assume), can you show me my erorrs and help me to improve?

giving up is not a option for me ^_^
You like to open a closed wound , aren't U? ^_^

+bonus http://torrentsmd.com/avatars/avatar_3306.gif :D

[lazy]

wow, and again you start getting cocky
you have some bad habits which you should dispose off, you know

[SlaviQ]

nop lazy.. i am aware of what can happen and i promised to not do that anymore :) don't think that i won't learn anything from my mistakes )

[lazy]

well that's good that you're aware, but you haven't learned anything atm, you don't even realise it
hope you will start soon

[Yōkai]

(01-26-2010 09:39 PM)ThunderBird Wrote:  Normal is the situation that you accept as stable. Believe, if something happen, there is no way to return to that normal."<= reformuleaza, nu e corect." here comes another normal that you accept, but is different from what normal "e diferit de care normal?". It's like jumping from a platform to another with fear of falling in darkness. Once you reached "in cazul asta nu sunt 100% sigura, dar e sau "once you have reached it" sau "once you reach it..."" it, you're safe until will "foloseste pronumele, nu are sens fara you" try to jump to another....

Well, every man has his own definition of normal: emos have their own normal, but this normal is kinda different from gops normal.. thats why you should find the place that suit "in cazul asta verbul e persoana a 2-a, present, deci e "suits" "you the most- through people that share your normal."? care e sensul la propozitie? reformuleaza"

Sometimes i feel like i stuck "nu folosi infinitiv, conjuga verbul persoana 1, present" between emo normal and gop normal, thats why i don't feel stability and my entire life is live "nu inteleg ce ai vrut sa spui, poate "i lived my entire life as if it was a continuous flow of instability?" sau ceva de genul asta, in orice caz ai vrea sa reformulezi " a fast running flow that won't give any stability :(

ma bucur ca doresti sa inveti din propriile greseli si ca nu iti e rusine sa le comiti pentru ca cineva sa te corecteze.

"who are you to judge?" ai dreptate, nu am nici un drept juridic sa te acuz pentru ceva ce nu a avut un efect direct asupra mea. dar sub argumentul moral ca "we live in a society that is getting more and more connected, therefore we have the moral obligation to look out for our peers". and i didn't "judge" i simply stated my opinion, hence the "imho" in the previous post.

[SlaviQ]

Yokai, thx

Lazy, I want to close this topic, how about you?

[lazy]

yes of course
try being more delicate further

p.s. it's an advice, it will serve you good, believe me

[SlaviQ]

okay.. i'll try my best ^_^

[KeyKey]

прозу тоже можно??? вроде было что-то милое у меня)

[biju]

выкладывай все что есть ))

[KeyKey]

... я медленно шла по дороге.. как всегда одна... и больше никто не был нужен... я смотрела себе под ноги... и никого не замечала... мой казырёк защищал меня от ветра ^_^ .. холодного.. зимнего ветра... я всё шла.. шлёпая по лужам...и грея руки в карманах... я замёрзла, я хотела домой.. я ускорила шаг... ветер притих и... я подняла голову... миллионы снежинок медленно танцевали в воздухе сменяя ритм то на медленный фокстрот.. то на венский вальс... я всё шла... снежинка заблудившись, попала на мои губы... я облизнулась ^_^ ... я снова опустила голову, пытаясь спрятаться за своим козырьком от ветра... снежинки облепили меня... это так мило ^_^... а я всё шла.. и смотрела себе под ноги... и как-то грустно стало ... снежинки медленно кружась падали.. и тут же погибали... таяли.. исчезали, смешавшись с грязными лужами...так странно... и обидно.. как будто... это чьи-то разбившиеся мечты.. которые никогда не смогут сбыться... мечты, о которых стоит забыть, желания, над которыми можно лишь посмеяться... и тут же оставить эту бредовую мысль.. сейчас я смотрю в окно... от снега не осталось и следа... лишь серая серая дорога, лужи...грязь... одинокий пешеход, который медленно идёт, как будто не понимая что твориться... я с тоской смотрю в небо... по небу стремительно летят птицы... как будто улетая от меня.. и вдруг я понимаю.. что.. мне так одиноко....сейчас я сижу одна... в полной тишине.. и только слышен стук пальцев по клавиатуре.... и звуки изредка проезжающих машин... ощущение пустоты... ощущение ненужности... грусть... тоска... одиночетво....


запись датируется январём 2009 года)

[SlaviQ]

You went to one random offline. Someone tooks camera and made some photos. Some time will pass, you browse gallery and watch the album. You notice that someone is missing. Exactly, it's the photographer. Was so hard to took the camera from his hands and made a photo? Nop, but you just let him with no memories.. shy /emo aren't their fault for being like that... the problem is selfcentered persons like you, who don't care about a fcking thing!!!

I know I have a lot of mistakes , too tired to find em, yokai, don't fuck me for this

[Slade]

herp derp, that's why theres always shifty placinta around making photos of everyone ( including the photographer himself) with his slick iphone.

[Placinta]

Suddenly...

[SlaviQ]

well it's not about peak... I just ecounted a similar situation and that drove me to write that )

[Placinta]

that drive me = drove me
I just ecounted similar = I just ecounted a similar

[SlaviQ]

thx )

[Yōkai]

I now started taking a writing class, so my first assignment is to write a story that i derived from a comic series my teacher gave me. The final idea is that it's gonna be the suicide note of a 15 year old that killed his sister because she was an attention whore. He was sexually obsessed w/ his strict, control freak of a mother but his sister was always getting in the way, so he killed her. After that, being further rejected by his mother(he didn't go to jail cuz his parents covered the crime in order to maintain a clean appearance in from of the world), he confesses and jumps off a building in the middle of the town.

And I invented all that from a comic about doggies...

I feel kind of freaked out while writing the whole thing...

[Hikaru]

assignment for english

p.s. care n-o citit the crucible, n-o sa inteleaga

Salem - The town of gore
Beneath the sheet of ignorance lies a cursed town
Where being free is a sin
Where people die after each dawn
And the Devil lies waiting with a full faced grin

Abigail, tormented by adult relations
Turns to witchcraft to make justice
But she fails to see the corpses
That because of her fall into abyss

Reverend Hale with his witchcraft book
And his hand over the village
As granted his position, he took
And the town still remained bewitched

Many stories drenched in gore and violence
And all of them'll remain in our conscience.

nu-i mare arta, da m-am straduit)

P.S. era tema pe az, da eu am uitat originalu acasa
asa ca postu ista m-o salvat x)